Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Some people believe that teachers have
responsibility
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a responsibility
to expel disruptive children from the
class
in order not disturb other children. In my opinion, it is not
appropriate way
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an appropriate way
to treat them and it can lead them to be worse not only in the school but
also
in their future. There are
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
appropriate way for best solutions
this
problems
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problem
.
Firstly
, expelling the bad children from the
class
is not have
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doesn't have
does not have
any advantages for them and the
class
as well, even though sometimes it can
also
lead to negative influence. According to the nature of kids, no children possess
such
a kind of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
as an inherent. If one child has
such
a kind of character, it can be assumed that they grew up in a family in which they had never learnt how to communicate with the
society
and how to help the
society
since they had
born
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borne
. As a
consequences
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consequence
, they become aggressive and disruptive children to their environment. Our
society
, especially teachers, should help them in the school rather than doing some inappropriate method,
for instance
, asking them to leave the
class
or
ignorance
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ignore
ignoring
ignored
ignores
them.
Furthermore
, there are some effective solving methods dealing with
such
a kind of misconduct
by
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with
children. Teachers should emphasis on monitoring them and guide them. By that it means,
teacher
should let them to involve in some school activities so that those children notice that they are taken care by their
teacher
and other students and they can learn some good characters from other children.
Besides
,
teacher
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the teacher
teachers
should make other students
to understand
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understand
and help,
for instance
, inviting them to participate in sport or asking them to sing or dance together rather than neglecting them. As a consequence, they will feel
more happy
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happier
, secure and
confidence
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confident
confidential
in their
neighboring
having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching
neighbouring
newborn
In conclusion, the bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of children are not their inherent. Teachers should not treat them to become the reckless person in
society
. The duty of
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
are
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is
to teach all the children to become a good person for
community
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the community
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disruptive
  • behavior
  • classroom
  • solution
  • approach
  • implement
  • positive reinforcement
  • rewards
  • additional support
  • resources
  • counseling
  • therapy
  • involving
  • parents
  • guardians
  • supportive
  • inclusive
  • classroom environment
  • managing
  • effective
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