Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays it is noticed that man's influence on the environment is resulting
to
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in
the death of some rare kind of animals
consequently
, reducing the numbers of different animals we have
in
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on
the ecosystem.
This
is because, there are no laws that govern the act of killing animals and
also
, no serious
punishment
for poaching, both problems can be tackled by the government by enacting laws that guide the killing of animals and giving serious
punishment
to those who go against
such
rules.
First
and foremost, one of the reasons why several species of animals are reducing is, because there are no regulations guiding the killing of animals,
thus
individuals do as they like. Some people go as far as killing the animals for fun.
This
means that, when there
are
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is
no set of rules, the society must follow before attempting to kill any animal, they take
this
opportunity to do as they wish.
For example
,
as a result
of incessant killings of animals in Nigeria, the species of animals have drastically reduced. Visiting places like Agodi garden in Ibadan is a shear waste of time and resources as there
are
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is
no diversity any longer, due to the fact that there are no rules guiding the society as regards killing of animals.
In addition
, another thing responsible for
this
problem is that, no due
punishment
has been accorded to poaching. Where killing of animals
are seen
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is seen
as an offence, no serious discipline
are given
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is given
to offenders.
This
means that anyone can go
scot
a native or inhabitant of Scotland
Scot
free even after committing
such
erroneous crime.
For instance
, a crime like poaching is not taken with levity in
developed
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developing
countries
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countries, thus
thus
you find diverse species of animals in them
in contrast
with other societies who take
such
crime with carelessness.
This
problem can be tackled by the
authorites
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
, by
first
, enacting laws that would stop the society from undue murdering of animals,
this
would control the rate at which animals are killed.
Secondly
, giving punishments that match the
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
to violators, when the citizens of a country know the consequences of poaching, they would think twice before they carry the act out. To conclude, lack of due discipline and increased killing of animals has led to loss of bio-diversity,
however
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however, this
this
issue can be handled by the government by enacting regulations that prevent poaching and by giving serious
punishment
to offenders.
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