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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a english speaking friend. In your letter explain explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Aasha, How have you been since we
last
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 met? It's been so long since we
last
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 were in touch but I haven't forgotten all the wonderful
time
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 we spent together
last
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 year. It's my birthday coming up and I wanted to invite you
at
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 my new
house
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 for
celebration
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the celebration
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. I have recently moved to a new
house
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, which is in
pitampura
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Pitampura
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 Delhi. I have been planning to buy a new
house
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 since
last
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Septemer
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September
. As you know, previously I was living in a rented
apartment
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 which was very far from
office
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the office
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. The reason for buying a new
house
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 was to save
the
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time
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 which
haven't
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hasn't
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 been possible if I were living in my old
apartment
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. My new
apartment
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 is in Kapil Vihar society which is close to my company. The society is full of greenery and away from
city
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the city
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 buzz. It has many parks with gym
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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for people to
excercise
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exercise
 and relax. My flat is in Vishnu Bhawan close to the society park. It is on the
second
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 floor and 2BHK
apartment
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. It has all modern
infrastructre
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infrastructure
 and amenities. I have shifted here
last
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 week. I would like you to invite
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me at
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at
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to
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 my birthday
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party
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part
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party
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 at my new
house
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. And
also
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 it had been a long
time
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 we haven't met each other. I always had a great
time
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 with you and miss all those moments we spent together. I hope to see you soon. Sanjana.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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