Some people tell that to reduce traffic and pollution, government should increase the tax on the petrol (gasoline). Would there is more benefits than the drawback?

Some people perceive that raising the tax on the petrol is an effective way to tackle traffic and pollution issues.

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a rising cost on the petrol can encourage more people to take public transportations, life quality of most of

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the poor can be adversely

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measure is applied. In my opinion, the negative points of

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action surpass the positive aspects. The crucial beneficial factor of imposing more taxes on the gas is that more people will opt various public transportations to commute daily

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as buses and subways as it is cheaper and faster than driving their own cars, resulting in less vehicles on the street.

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, it is

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method to cope with air pollutions as it leads to a significant reduction of

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emission. To illustrate, a recent research conducted in Japan has revealed that a growing number of vehicles over the

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decade are accountable for the gradually worsening traffic congestions and low air quality in the city. For these reasons, these advantages

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a profound impact on our society.

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, every coin has two sides. One main negative consequence of

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practice is that people’s life

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the poor will be negatively impacted because basic living costs will go up if petrol prices is increased.

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, the price of different items in the supermarket will rise as the transportation company will spend more money on the gas to deliver goods.

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, people may face lack of options to commute if transportation infrastructures are not upgraded. As can be seen,

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action

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generates negative consequences on people’s daily life. To sum up, people’s opinion seems to differ as to whether or not should authorities

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more taxes on the gasoline. Taking everything into consideration, I’m inclined to say that the negative drawbacks of

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practice are superior.