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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT IS POSSIBLE TO TELL A LOT ABOUT A PERSON'S CULTURE AND CHARACTER FROM THEIR CHOICE OF CLOTHES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

#people #person #culture #character #choice #clothes
The world is a home for more than a 1000 of cultures and, while most of them are
unknown there
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unknown, there
 are quite many which can be depicted but the dressing sense of the person. In my opinion the attire of a
preson
a human being
person
 is like looking
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 their heritage. Certain cultures are associated with different attires
such
 as, turban for Sikhs, long beard without a
mustauche
an unshaved growth of hair on the upper lip
moustache
 is a Muslim, etc. The Muslim women generally wear
burkha
 which covers their entire body except for their eyes.
This
 is associated with them eating meat, no pork,
also
 daily activities like worshiping time and place which is the Mosque. The cross on the neck means Christianity, which means the
pearson
a human being
person
 following it eats meat, goes to
sunday
first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians
Sunday
 mass and worships Jesus in the Church. An individual with a tattoo on the face are Maori people from New Zealand who have
arich
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a rich
 culture related to the Sun, earth and wind.
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Attire
For example
, yo
u
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,
can understand more about their habit attire, physical , can know quite much
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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