Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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life
is being harmed by the high-speed and Use synonyms
pressure
of contemporary lifestyles. I somewhat agree with Use synonyms
this
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for families to be together, and stress leads to arguments Use synonyms
among
family members; Suggestion
between
however
, due to the increased Linking Words
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pressure
and stress families are forced to cooperate more, which brings them closer together.
The main reason why I believe family Use synonyms
life
is being compromised is because families have less Use synonyms
time
to be with each other. As individual family members are busier at work and with their social lives, they have less Use synonyms
time
to spend with their family. As well as Use synonyms
this
, people have many things they have to do these days Linking Words
such
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e-mail
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email
time
is left for family Use synonyms
life
. To illustrate, I spend about two hours online every night attending to daily correspondence before chatting with my family members, whereas ten years ago I would spend Use synonyms
time
with my family from the moment I walked in the door.
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In addition
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pressure
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life
these days means that even when families do get together arguments are more likely. Use synonyms
This
is because everyone feels tired and they are more likely to Linking Words
get irritated and to
react to their heightened emotional levels.
Suggestion
get irritated and
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, it does seem reasonable that Linking Words
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pressure
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also
lead to positive outcomes. One Linking Words
such
possibility is that family members will cooperate more in order to overcome Linking Words
time
limitations. Use synonyms
For instance
, they may share household chores, so that everybody has Linking Words
time
to relax afterwards.
In conclusion, I somewhat believe that the rapid pace and stressful nature of contemporary lifestyles are having negative consequences on family relationships. Use synonyms
This
is because family members have less Linking Words
time
, and when they are together they feel less relaxed. Use synonyms
However
, I admit that sometimes adversity can bring people closer together. Given Linking Words
this
situation, it seems that family members should try to be more supportive Linking Words
to
one another and Suggestion
of
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also parents need to
set aside regular times for families to relax together.Suggestion
parents also need to
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