In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

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Environmentalists today are campaigning for “reduce, recycle and re-use” in a bid to save the world, but we as a nation, have adopted “replace” as our mantra.
This
and many other factors are leading to a throwaway
society
, and there are many problems being caused by
this
which I shall discuss in
this
essay. The reasons for our becoming a throwaway
society
are manifold.
Firstly
, in a quest for better living standards, we wish to own the latest
equipments
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equipment
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and gadgets. Once new
things
are acquired, we
dispose-off
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these “unwanted”
things
to
second hand
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shops or just in the trash cans.
Secondly
, the markets today are flooded with cheap, single-use-only
things
that are more in demand than
high priced
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quality items. Our houses and closets seem to be overflowing with goods that are more in quantity and less in value.
Finally
, there is too much packaging done by the companies in a bid to make their
things
more attractive. The effects of
this
trend are
also
manifold. Pollution and filling up of the landfill sites by
non biodegradable
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material is a great cause of concern. Global warming is taking up mammoth dimensions and unless we do something about it, our earth will become uninhabitable very soon. To add to it, there is intense competition and rivalry among the affluent
for becoming
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society
’s
trend setters
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.
This
tendency has played havoc on the middle-class strata. People are working long arduous hours to earn more and more money so that they can keep up with Joneses and Smiths or else lose face.
This
is creating stress among people and people are losing social and moral values. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, the current abundance of choice
coupled with
the ease with which
things
are discarded as soon as they lose their newness has given rise to a throwaway
society
which is having a detrimental effect on the individuals and
society
.
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