Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued whether pupils should pay for their
education
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, or the
government
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should subsidise the
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fee and make it totally free. Personally, I believe,
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government
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the government
needs to subsidise heavily into the
education
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sector, so that everyone can have access to the body of
knowledge
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.
Firstly
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, we live in a
knowledge
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based economy, where proper
knowledge
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and
skillset
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sets the backbone of a modern society. Access to information and
knowledge
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is one of the basic needs to be fulfilled,
further
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, without
peoper
marked by suitability or rightness or appropriateness
proper
skills and
knowledge
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no one can survive in
future
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the future
.
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hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, in order to secure the
livelyhood
the financial means whereby one lives
livelihood
livelihoods
of its people the
government
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should have
porper
marked by suitability or rightness or appropriateness
proper
scheme and fund for primary to university level
education
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.
For instance
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, in many countries
such
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as Bangladesh most of the people
can not
can not
cannot
afford the required
education
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they need,
therefore
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, the
government
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should take the responsibility and cater
this
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basic need for the people.
Secondly
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, to build a better country, having
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
and skillfull people is the key factor to boost economic growth and prosperity.
Therefore
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, the
government
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should look at
this
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investment
into
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in
education
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sector as investing
into
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in
human capital development. If the citizen
have
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has
the access to tuition fee less
education
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, they will eventually turn out to be future economist, scientist, lawyer etc.
that
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That
a country needs for
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
development.
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, with a free
education
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system, more people will be interested to enhance their capabilities which is almost impossible when everyone has to pay for their
education
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. Overall, the more free the
education
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is, the more capable human capital a country will get. In conclusion, my view is every citizen deserves to be enlightened with
knowledge
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, and the
government
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needs to provide the platform by making
education
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free for the people that will eventually turn them into future assets.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socio-economic background
  • equitable society
  • government-funded
  • higher quality standards
  • financial limitations
  • inefficiencies
  • wasteful spending
  • cost-effective
  • innovate
  • undervaluing
  • dropout rates
  • financial burden
  • well-being
  • higher education uptake
  • increased taxes
  • reallocation
  • vital sectors
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