Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people argue that these days the world provides us too many choices to choose and there are various ways exist to build our future. Having said that in some cases there are
preplaned
(computing) prefix or add to the beginning
prepended
ways to do and people
dont
do not
don't
have right to choose. By increment of the
availibility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of cutting edge technologies and reaching a huge amount of data, the
awairness
having knowledge of
awareness
of people increases and it leads to create countless ways for people to choose their
lifestyle
Accept comma addition
lifestyle, such
such
as major, job opportunities, leisure activities, and totally
their
people in general
they
percieve
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
from
Suggestion
of
the world. In some developed countries, governments launch wide
nation
Suggestion
national
publicity
campaines
a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
to
edjucate
give an education to
educate
people all the available options that people can choose to
doin
Suggestion
do in
their future. Social expert
postulate
Suggestion
postulates
that these kind of
budjet
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
budgets
allocation from
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
help societies to raise their
knoledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
and
boarden
make broader
broaden
their horizons to choose a better choice. Some people assume the current people’s
lifestyle
has been
controled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
by
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
and people don’t have the right to make a decision about their
lifestyle
. From their point of view,
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
devise plans for societies’s
next
generation and provide some certain
preplaned
way of
lifestyle
to
Suggestion
for
people. Given the mentioned point,
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
with respect to the amount of
requirment
required activity
requirements
requirement
of some academic majors and job infrastructures, announce some
limitted
small in range or scope
limited
official job opportunities. In conclusion, with considering the vivid role of government and their great impact
of
Suggestion
on
them to people’s daily routine and
lifestyle
, there are too many choices to choose and people have freedom to choose.
Submitted by spyboy1367 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
What to do next:
Look at other essays: