Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, Eco imbalance became
an
Suggestion
a
serious issue and caused or causing by people across the globe. There are many reasons for
this
and important of them are discussed below. Coming to the cause, They are various ways by which problem have been created.
Firstly
, deforestation, due to which there is rapid change in climate conditions, which add to the point.
For example
, too much cut down of trees, impact the global temperature and rainfall. Because of that, some species population have
decrease
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decreased
in their count.
Secondly
, Increase in meat consumption, hunting or fishing may lead to extinction of some more animal's.
For example
,
As a result
of fishing, population of most of the
sea food
edible fish (broadly including freshwater fish) or shellfish or roe etc
seafood
pupulation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
populations
got reduced and few got disappeared. Switching to the solutions for the above, Everyone should be responsible for increase of green.
This
increase rains and decrease the heat.
For example
, Forest area
tend
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tends
to more cool than the places, where we don't have trees. Regarding the other, we should encourage public to go for more vegetarian and less meat in their meal. Because of
this
, we can restore the about to extinction animal count. For a stand, if people tend to eat more fruits and vegetables,
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
prey
Suggestion
the prey
of
othe
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
the
living beings for food will be reduced. In Conclusion, Not only the government, but it
also
the
reponsibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of each and
everyone
Suggestion
every one
of us to reduce the problem and keep the balance in nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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