Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days disciplining

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children

is a headache for

parents

. Many of the

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further

resort to smacking as a common practice to control their offspring.

However

, I absolutely discourage

such

violent activity towards kids. In

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essay, the adverse impacts of spanking or punishing

children

will be discussed in detail. Using punishment as a tool to straighten up the

children

is quite common and

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has been in practice for centuries. It is true that

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resorting to spanking or beating up kids will generate instant results.

However

,

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instant gratification of discipline

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deep scars in the tender minds of these

children

, which can have

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impact on their behaviour, when they become

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.

For instance

, several studies have proven that

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kind of childhood trauma can cause clinical depression, make

children

unsocial and in a

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scenario, make them violent toward others.

Hence

, the

parents

should be careful about how they control their offspring.

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,

parents

are usually busy with their jobs to support the family.

This

situation makes the

children

turn into little attention seekers,

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a result, they become annoying to the

parents

. But if the

parents

get tired of their

children

’s behaviour and smack them to discipline, it will be very bad for the child and hurt their feelings in a brute manner. The

children

may slowly shut down to their

parents

which will create detachment with the

parents

.

Therefore

, it will make the

children

less confident, unsocial and

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in some cases. In conclusion,

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against any sort of physical violence toward

children

in order to let them grow as confident and social human beings.

Therefore

, I believe, smacking cannot be a plausible option to discipline and raise

children

. Rather we should raise them with love and care, and shower them will

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attention that they need.