Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
These days people
interest
much Suggestion
interested
sport
branch which include safety
or not. Some confliction
is thought to ban these extreme sports a food rich in sugar
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beacuse
of threatening to human for the reason that; on account of
because
life
. In my opinion is that the extreme sports ought to make who can choose individaul
decision.
a human being
individual
First
of all, it is obivious
that the extreme easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
sport
can kill person or make a disabillity
. It might be very scary the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disability
experience
, but the Suggestion
experiencing
sportman
has known about extreme sports outcomes. Some people need not to pass their someone who engages in sports
sportsman
life
in a hospital. Thus
, they prefer more safety
branch of the sports such
as swiming
or the act of swimming
swimming
runing
. People like stability and no (American football) a play in which a player attempts to carry the ball through or past the opposing team
running
mather
worries in their a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
mother
matter
lifes
.
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
However
, It is a kind of natural human pychological
satisfaction. mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
Monoton
Suggestion
Monotone
life
is not kill
your Suggestion
is not killing
does not kill
doesn't kill
has not killed
ambitions but
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ambitions, but
also
, it boost
make Suggestion
boosts
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
someting
. an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
Consequencly
, extreme Suggestion
Consequently
sport
gives a diffrent
emotions to escape from natural basic urban unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
life
. Moreover
, bad tempered people feed these activity
who finding opportunity bring away some emotions. Suggestion
activities
Also
, these people might be potential
Suggestion
potentially
crimal
.
Another important issue is the individual freedom. People can do everything
, unless they damage someone or something. someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime
criminal
crime
Thus
, if the enough safety
made by experts, ıt would be not
problem to referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
banned
these supports. Suggestion
ban
for
instance, the Suggestion
For
safety
can provide over these condition
; versed and good educated Suggestion
these conditions
this condition
sportmans
. someone who engages in sports
sportsman
sportsmen
Also
versed sportmans
skilled past experience about sport
platforms, therefore
they could give a
idea about Suggestion
an
branch
. Suggestion
the branch
Additionaly
, the medical services are always ready to accident.
In short, on the one hand, Restriction is not acceptable in our modern world. Suggestion
Additionally
on
the other hand, the Suggestion
On
sport
expertises should improve facalities
with qualified a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
sportmans
. Therefore
, the number of quilty
can be Suggestion
cities
city
quality
equity
decrease
due to extreme sports.
Suggestion
decreased
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