In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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In many nations, the government is giving priority to economic
growth leaving
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growth, leaving
behind all other issues.
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the main advantage can be increased work opportunities, I believe that the
health
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sector will have a severe impact. The primary benefit is
people
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the people
of that nation will get more employment offers.
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that
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That
is to say, as the government constructs more companies and factories to increase their economic status in the global market they need more people to work for them. For that reason, they recruit labour and staff from the general
public offering
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public, offering
jobs and
good
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better
salaries.
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, Japan holds the number 2 position in the world in terms of the economy because of their immense efforts in
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area. Despite
this
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, I believe that other sectors
such
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as
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should be given more importance.
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sectors of the nations who follow
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trend could undergo tremendous strain.
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, people may suffer from poor
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due to improper medical facilities and sometimes can cause death.
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, there will more strain on the country's
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care system to allocate an additional budget to mitigate these issues.
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, in Bhutan in 2011, more than a thousand people died of flu due to lack of proper
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provisions. I believe that any country should give more importance to the
health
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sector to save its
people
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peoples'
peoples
lives. In conclusion,
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the benefit of creating more jobs is possible by prioritising economic growth, the country may
also
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suffer from an improper
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system is a major drawback. It is recommended that all nations in the world prioritise
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health-care
the preservation of mental and physical health by preventing or treating illness through services offered by the health profession
healthcare
system to protect its public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • quality of life
  • standard of living
  • infrastructure development
  • employment opportunities
  • environmental impact
  • wealth disparity
  • modernization
  • sustainable development
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • industrialization
  • ecological footprint
  • capital investment
  • urbanization
  • economic prosperity
  • fiscal policy
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