Nowadays, people of all ages from certain part of the world spends most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons. Is this negative or positive development?

In present-day

socety

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

,

indivisuals

a human being

individuals

, especially from developed countries, regardless of their age tend to stay at

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of going outside. Some underlying reasons

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as limited free

time

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are attributed to

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orientation. As far as I am concerned, I believe spending most of the

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at

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is a negative human progress which is followed by some fundamental problems including loneliness, obesity and addiction. The causes of lack of tendency to spend

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outdoors are manifold.

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and foremost, modern lifestyle has caused

significant decline

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a significant decline

significant declines

in people’s spare

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. It is obvious that individuals feel exhausted after a long working day and prefer to relax at

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rather than going out. In the

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place, most of the traditional activities have lost their attraction and have been substituted by new ones which mainly can be

dne

having finished or arrived at completion

done

inside through virtual world. Take today’s teenagers as an example, playing computer games in their private rooms is much more exciting than football.

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but not least, new facilities and possibilities offered by new technologies has made most of commuting unnecessary. To illustrate, consider online purchasing. Individuals can easily buy their essential items simply by a click at

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. The public tendency in some parts of the world to stay at

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rather than going outdoors has led to some major problems.

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of all, people communicate less than past with each other and isolate themselves in four walls of

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the house

a house

houses

;

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loneliness and depression has come to them.

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,

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trend can result in shortage of physical movement which is a major reason of obesity.

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, addiction to virtual world can be regarded as another contributing problem.

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to say, some people get addicted

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to communicating

throughout the Internet and escape real life. To sum up, there are several factors contributed to individuals lower interest to go outside. In my point of view,

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trend has

devastative impact

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a devastating impact

devastating impact

on society

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as depression, and relevant authorities should take suitable measures to address them.