Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

Now a

days

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day

it has become a norm to be raised by

ones

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one's

grandparents.Since the immediate parents are occupied by their

curriers

the particular occupation for which you are trained

careers

and they can hardly find any

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vacation

vacant

time to spend with their kids.The

upcomming

of the relatively near future

upcoming

essay will elaborate the

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

and drawbacks of being

broughtup

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brought up

by grandparents and how it affects the family.

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To

begin with, grandparents have the

experiance

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

and tolerance to deal with

kids

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kids, hence

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it is

benifecial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for them to raise the kids.

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Secondly kids

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Secondly, kids

learn a lot

form

a giver or sender

from

their grandparents in terms of manners

,

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,

ethics, love and care.Parents are usually more comfortable in leaving their kids with their grandparents as

commpared

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

compered

compare

to a babysitter or unknown strangers.

kids

a young person of either sex

Kids

will learn the warmth and respect for elderly in their youth when their upbringing is done by elderly grandparents.

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the words of

wisdem

accumulated knowledge or erudition or enlightenment

wisdom

that

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

got from my grandfather were priceless, he

tought

impart skills or knowledge to

taught

thought

me the ways of life that

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

could have taken me years to learn

my self

reflexive form of "me"

myself

. There

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are

have been

always

to

being one more than one

two

sides to

story

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the story

a story

,

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,

when we talk about the disadvantages of being raised by grandparents being spoiled by their love is the

first

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thing that comes to mind.

Secondly

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, when kids spend less time with their immediate

parents they

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parents, they

tend to

losse

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

loose

their respect for their father and mother.Kids will no longer be

emmotionaly

in an emotional manner

emotionally

emotional

attached

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Attached

to them any more and that will cause a gap in their relationship.As the kids will grow up they will fill

this

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gap with drugs or crime. To conclude, it is both healthy and unhealthy to be raised completely by grandparents.Grandparents should always be a part of

kids

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kids'

life and they must play a vital role in their

upbringing but

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upbringing, but

similarly

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parents should not entirely hand over their

responsiblities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

of raising their own kids to their parents.It will create a psychological gap in the

kids

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kids'

minds and will result in

violance

an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)

violence

and crime in the long run.