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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#sports #sky
Now a
days
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day
, a fair crowd of
population wish
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the population wish
 to get engaged in life threatening activities like skydiving, motorcycle race,
white-water
frothy water as in rapids or waterfalls
whitewater
 river rafting and much more. I believe these
sport
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sports
 are really playful and safe, and
therefore
 I strongly stand for these activities. I totally agree to have these kind of
sport
 activity across the nation, so that all
kind
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kinds
 of people can experience the delightful moments.
To begin
 with, extreme
sport
 are really exciting the people across all
ages though
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ages, though
 it has some restrictions in certain health conditions. People who are fond of getting thrilling experiences will definitely opt for these kind of sports as the feel while performing these is unimaginable.
For instance
, I personally with my family went through the river rafting
sport
in
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on
Teesta river
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the Teesta river
 during one of our
vacation
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vacations
 with two kids. I would definitely say that’s one of our unforgettable holiday as we enjoyed to the core. We were accompanied by two more adults who
are really well trained
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really well train
 in the
sport
 and they were able to provide proper guidance for us throughout, which negated that the initial hesitation we had is meaningless.
Secondly
, extreme sports are not as dangerous as many people think. There are several regulations and safety procedures that one must follow to prevent the possibility of accidents.
However
, we must agree that it has the other side as well. These
sport
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sports
 are likely to pose a life threatening risk to the people. Not only can perilous sports leads to serious injuries, sometimes even cause death of persons involved in them.
Eventually it
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Eventually, it
also require
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also requires
huge amount
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a huge amount
huge amounts
 of money to be poured in. To conclude, these perilous
sport
 shouldn’t be banned as it will
demotivate
 the people who are really interested in, but the organizers should continue to improvise the equipment and safety measure to nullify the accidents. Regards, Kayal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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