Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face to face communication is better than the other types of communication,such as letters,e-mail, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In
this
generation
were
In or at or to what place
where
pace
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the pace
of globalization is quickening, Communicating is made easier by letters
,
Accept space
,
e-mails or telephone calls.
However
, I believe that personal communication is still the best way in communicating with other people because of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
positive impacts towards the well being of people. Interpersonal interaction is essential for every human being for them to have a well developed social skills.
For instance
,
as a child some
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as a child, some
are sent in formal school not only to acquire knowledge from
teachers but
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teachers, but
also
to have interaction with their other classmates. Talking with their classmates
face
to
face
will strengthen their bond. It will help them deal with other people.
For example
, they will learn that being generous and kind will bring them more friends.
Therefore
,
this
prepares them for their future relationships towards their
colleages
an associate that one works with
colleagues
. Another effect if discussion of one's thoughts, disappointments and dreams are done personally would be
sense
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sensible
of
belonginness
. That leads to
alleviance
an amount allowed or granted (as during a given period)
allowance
with isolation and depression. Communication can
also
be done by observing. Example for that are body language
such
as shrugging of shoulders
,
Accept space
,
pouting and many other gestures and facial expression.
This
is for
better understanding
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a better understanding
towards the person we talk to. In conclusion, people invented many alternatives for communication, but nothing beats the same old style our ancestors did
for
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in
this
past
decades
Suggestion
decade
of human existence in
this
world, which is
face
to
face
communication.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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