Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

During the time of technology boom

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prevelance

the quality of prevailing generally; being widespread

prevalence

of television and computer games has increased and gone along with

myriad

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the myriad

of violent incidents

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While some people attributes it to exert a great

ingluence

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

on the public

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the others believe it has no impact on people’s demeanour

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I strongly believe that media

violence

do spoil our behaviour pattern to some extent

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Firstly

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people

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especially children,

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has

a tendency to

do

engage in

make

an impression of motives which was displayed on TV

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For instance

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children will imitate the way of battling on the virtual worlds and transfer it into real life

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Moreover

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the more aggression and

violence

you are surrounded by

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the more cold –blooded and restrained you get

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Secondly

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the crimes of

violence

is attributed

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are attributed

to the excessive access to

gagets

a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

gadgets

such

as computer games or violent media

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For example

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the combat and shooting games make teenagers become more truculent

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Surpringly

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Surprisingly

enough

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they

tranfer

transfer somebody to a different position or location of work

transfer

this

warlike approach into the real world as the way to evince their

compative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

spirits and comfort themselves

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As a result

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the rate of juvenile delinquency has risen considerably

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Last

but not least

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violence

has inclination to turn to social evil

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It is

examplified

be characteristic of

exemplified

that addictive gamer stole money or even resorted to

violence

if they were

detered

spoiled or ruined or demolished

destroyed

deterred

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The activities of

such

men represent a constant threat to the welfare society, and much being done to reform them. In conclusion

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violence

in contemporary media plays a part of role to shape children 's behavioural patterns

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Therefore

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we had better to make use of its function and minimize its effect

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