Some people think that media like newspaper should stop publishing the information about the people's private life , Others think that control to stop such publication should be put in place. Discuss both views and state you opinion.

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A recent trend in the world now is that

newspaper house

Suggestion

the newspaper house

publish

information

on people's personal life.

Although

, some people have advocated for

this

to stop some population think that controls should

instead

be put in

place

to prevent

such

. In my opinion, I believe

this

trend cannot be

stopped

Accept comma addition

stopped, however

however

it can be mitigated by putting proper controls in

place

. On one hand, people think that ones personal news should not find its way into the papers as it is an invasion of the masses space and right. Most times,

such

information

is printed in order to have a captivating headline which grabs the attention of the readers and thereby lead to greater purchase of the papers. While

this

is of great benefit to the publisher,

this

has

however caused

Accept comma addition

however, caused

more harm than

well

Suggestion

good

to the people whose data is being reported.To exemplify, it was reported by Sun Newspapers on 15th May 2018 that a popular actor 'Jim Iyke' had a child outside his home, his wife never knew of

this but

Accept comma addition

this, but

after reading the

information

in the print, she was heartbroken and

this

led to the break up of their marriage. All

this

would have been prevented if

such

data were not in print.

On the other hand

, while the media

can not

cannot

be fully stopped as there is freedom of speech, I believe control can be put in

place

Such

controls include and not

limted

small in range or scope

limited

to; filtering of news before printing and fining newspapers that print personal

information

For instance

, the

Information

Bill of 1983 which provided that publishing houses should be sued for all sensitive

information

printed should be followed rigorously and any publisher found erring should be

appropraitely

in an appropriate manner

appropriately

punished. Once

this

control is in

place

, and punishment is melted on a

scape goat

someone who is punished for the errors of others

scapegoat

this

will serve as a form of warning to other media houses. To conclude, people's thirst for

information

is increasing daily. While it is important to feed

this

thirst, media homes should ensure that in doing

this

, no one is hurt and controls should be established to ensure people's well guided

information

are not

spitted

Suggestion

spitting

spat

out.

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Some people think that media like newspaper should stop publishing the information about the people's private life , Others think that control to stop such publication should be put in place. Discuss both views and state you opinion.

Your opinion

77.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Many young people regularly change their job over the years. What are the reasons for this. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In many countries, there is shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the country side, others argue for the regeneration of cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of building new towns in the country?

Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?