Some people think that media like newspaper should stop publishing the information about the people's private life , Others think that control to stop such publication should be put in place. Discuss both views and state you opinion.
A recent trend in the world now is that
newspaper house
publish Suggestion
the newspaper house
information
on people's personal life. Although
, some people have advocated for this
to stop some population think that controls should instead
be put in place
to prevent such
. In my opinion, I believe this
trend cannot be stopped
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stopped, however
however
it can be mitigated by putting proper controls in place
.
On one hand, people think that ones personal news should not find its way into the papers as it is an invasion of the masses space and right. Most times, such
information
is printed in order to have a captivating headline which grabs the attention of the readers and thereby lead to greater purchase of the papers. While this
is of great benefit to the publisher, this
has however caused
more harm than Accept comma addition
however, caused
well
to the people whose data is being reported.To exemplify, it was reported by Sun Newspapers on 15th May 2018 that a popular actor 'Jim Iyke' had a child outside his home, his wife never knew of Suggestion
good
this but
after reading the Accept comma addition
this, but
information
in the print, she was heartbroken and this
led to the break up of their marriage. All this
would have been prevented if such
data were not in print.
On the other hand
, while the media can not
be fully stopped as there is freedom of speech, I believe control can be put in can not
cannot
place
. Such
controls include and not limted
to; filtering of news before printing and fining newspapers that print personal small in range or scope
limited
information
. For instance
, the Information
Bill of 1983 which provided that publishing houses should be sued for all sensitive information
printed should be followed rigorously and any publisher found erring should be appropraitely
punished. Once in an appropriate manner
appropriately
this
control is in place
, and punishment is melted on a scape goat
, someone who is punished for the errors of others
scapegoat
this
will serve as a form of warning to other media houses.
To conclude, people's thirst for information
is increasing daily. While it is important to feed this
thirst, media homes should ensure that in doing this
, no one is hurt and controls should be established to ensure people's well guided information
are not spitted
out.Suggestion
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spat
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