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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Most of the day is spent in the work environment performing our various tasks.
However
, It is said by some populace that maintaining a good relationship in the
office
 is not necessary as our major aim should be on the getting
job
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the job
 done. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement as I believe that connection should be made in the work place for future purposes as well as to promote togetherness.
Firstly
, I believe
one
 should establish long standing friendships in the
office
 as
this
 can be useful in the future. As the saying goes, "No man is an island"
thus
 when in need, we can turn to friends made in the
office
. Friends made in the place of assignment can be needed to render help during emergencies or when in need.
For instance
, it was reported in the paper that a dying man who could not afford his surgery, was saved and operated on by his colleague's father who is a renowned surgeon.
This
 could only
happene
come to pass
happen
happened
happens
 due to the fact that the co-workers maintained cordial affiliations.
Also
, having a good relationship in the
office
 is paramount as
this
help
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helps
 to foster
one
 spirit and togetherness. To achieve a common goal,
one
 needs a firm where everyone
see
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sees
 each other as
family
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a family
 and all are keen towards helping
one
 another grow and accomplish his tasks.Most companies see
this
 as essential which is why they organize team bonding, picnics and end of year party. To exemplify
,
Accept space
,
In the recent inter company competition, which was widely publicised, the winner- ABC enterprises won due to team spirits and solid relationship amongst the employees
.
Accept space
.
 All
this
 and more is the benefit of having good affiliation with your colleagues. To conclude, while some believe that an
office
 should be just a place to carry out your primary assignment. I disagree with
this
 view and I suggest that our heart should be
opened
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open
 to opportunities and relationships that can be formed in the work environment as
this
 will go a long way in our future.
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