People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Illegal drugs
have been experminting
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are experimenting
have been experimenting
nowadays in a widespread
between
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among
young youth and early ages specially in schools and colleges. There are many reasons why youth heads to using drugs, one of them an example
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of
for
one of the parents or other members in the family doing that in front of the children.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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, The child
often grow
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often grows
up with full understanding that there
is
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are
no mistakes in taking drugs.
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the other hand
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family, but
, the surrounding
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environments
environmental
environment
such
as schools and the
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
in bullying between students and the easy access to it The effects of widespread drug use
between
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among
youth in modern days will generate a generation full with no ambition, no future and no vision. In order to stop the misuse of drugs, There is a gigantic role on Schools by making a weekly tutor
for instance
talking and
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
the students from the
riskniess
of using drugs.
Otherwise
, TV programs and advertising introduced by famous of social media and entertainment will contribute
evantually
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
in
decresing
becoming less or smaller
decreasing
in numbers. In conclusion, There must be cooperation
betwen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
authorties
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
, schools and media to develop a joint program to increase the
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
regarding drug abuse.
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