Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"

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In recent times, it has been observed that
majority
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the majority
of students prefer to
further
their education in another country. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think having to relocate to a foreign land for academic purpose has numerous benefits
such
as
job
opportunity against any disadvantage it might bring.
To begin
with, students who travel abroad to
further
their education do so in order to have a career pathway in a serene environment.
This
is because, the academic calendar in foreign countries is one
that is
devoid of strikes which could be
as a result
of government shut down, labour union issues and students cultism as may be
find
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found
in many West African countries.
Additionally
, the student is able meet several individuals from different countries, and
consequently get
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consequently gets
exposed to other
to
being one more than one
two
cultures and norms through their interactions. Another point to consider is that students who advances their education abroad are exposed to quicker
job
opportunities after graduation.
In other words
,
such
students after the completion of their studies tend to get better
job
offers due to the knowledge they have acquired in a more civilized environment.
As a result
, they have an edge in attracting the best companies globally for
job
vacancies,
thus
ending up securing the best
job
offers. An example of
this
can be found in Nigeria, where many
multi national
involving or operating in several nations or nationalities
multinational
companies
such
as shell and Chevron favour candidates with a foreign degree for their
job
placements, than applicants with who possess a degree in the country. In conclusion,
although
there are some negative effects of having to study abroad, it's benefits
such
as exposure to a foreign culture and having a secured future through a good
job
offer after graduation makes it a unique opportunity everyone should aim for.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Global citizenship
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Cutting-edge facilities
  • Networking opportunities
  • Career advancement
  • Financial constraints
  • Acclimatization challenges
  • Support network
  • Educational disparity
  • Reverse culture shock
  • Bilingualism
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