Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traditionally, some people hold the belief that pending money on training elite competitors to shine on the international stage is worthwhile. Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to believe that a country should invest more in youngsters’ physical conditions, and

therefore

stimulate their interest

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in

taking part in sports from

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early age. Some people believe that it is not worthwhile to finance sports competitors merely for the purpose of achieving success in the global arena if we take the poor situation of

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the property of a body that causes it to have weight in a gravitational field

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sports into consideration. The lack of physical exercise has become a huge problem among citizens, particularly teenagers, as the construction and maintenance of sports

facilities

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Facilities

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are

underfunded

not precisely limited, determined, or distinguished

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. Actually, children's sports activities are

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beneficial for the future development of la nation as sports can ensure that children maintain enthusiasm for sports

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keep good physical condition in the future study so that they deserve more financial support from the government las well as sponsors of sports events. Admittedly, global sports contests not only provide

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the audience

audiences

with a_ perfect opportunity to

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derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in

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the excellent performances of athletes but

also

provide host countries a perfect chance to present the success of the event in front of global political and business leaders

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are highly likely to watch

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the hive broadcast

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money for supporting competitors to take part in worldwide sports competitions seems to bring little actual effect to

general public

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the general public

. It is largely because there are only a few top athletes having the chance to win the

medals but

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medals, but

their routine training demands high-standard facilities which can hardly be used by ordinary people. In conclusion, when countries raise

fund

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funds

for sports or celebrate the victory of their athletes, they should not neglect the fact that many children are in great need of sports facilities.