Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is a growing consensus among many people that individual photographers should not follow famous personalities and interfere in their personal life by capturing

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is the price to pay for being famous. On the one hand, it is indisputable that people intruding on your territory, trying to take a picture of your every movement could, to put it mildly, irritate. Celebrities are often bothered by photographers who capture every moment of their life.

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, while coming out of a gym or a movie hall or even a doctor’s clinic, they are being watched and followed.

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, they are restricted to dine out with their families. To illustrate

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, a recent UK government report showed that a large number of celebs, including

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, actors, actresses and models have been chased by intrusive photographers and

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meet with fatal accidents.

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privacy

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is essential, nowadays celebrities have adapted themselves to

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behaviour as they gain popularity through it. Media persons have a complete right to intervene in the private life of famous personalities due to which the public has made them shining stars overnight.

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, through the love and support of the people, they have climbed the ladder of success.

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, the airport looks have become so common nowadays for the same reason. Karan Johar, the famous Indian director, once said in an interview that he prepares and dresses up to catch the eyes of the photographers. In conclusion, I believe that famous personalities should not be disturbed when they are spending some quality time with family members and close ones.

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, while it is true that media should respect the

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need to realise that encroachment on

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is the price to pay for being popular. Those who really value their

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can always choose not to be a celebrity.

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invasion of privacy
personal space
media scrutiny
mental health
public figures
relentless pursuit
legal implications
ethical considerations
tabloid journalism
financial gain
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