Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned do you agree or disagree?

It
is often believe
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is often believed
that
plastic
shopping bags have a negative effect on the environment by increasing the rate of pollution not only on
land but
Accept comma addition
land, but
also
the sea,
therefore
some people think that
plastic
bags should be banned. I completely agree with
this
opinion and believe that the government should should start gradually prohibit using
those
plural of "this"
these
bags for shopping purposes.
Firstly
, it is a common fact that
plastic
bags are non-biodegradable.
In other words
, it might take up to
hundred years
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a hundred years
for them to decompose and turn
to
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into
pisces
a separate part of a whole
pieces
.
Consequently
, once the
plastic
bags are
burried
placed in a grave
buried
bored
blurred
or thrown into the ocean most of wild animals will eat them causing major issues and might lead to death.
For instance
, a turtle may get mistaken between a transparent
plastic
bag and a jelly fish and eat the bag where to turtle choke and even die painfully.
Secondly
, some countries decide to burn the
plastic
bags rather than burying them, which is definitely not a solution. To state it
in other words
, burning
plastic
shopping bags increase the
toxible
(of goods or funds) subject to taxation
taxable
substances in the air, which will definitely result to a gradual development of deadly diseases
such
as cancer
to
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in
people inhaling
this
toxic air frequently.
This
fact is evidenced by the statistics published in orient news where it is stated that seventy percent of people dying from lung cancer are either living or working in locations near factories designated to burn
plastic
substances. In conclusion, I strongly believe that banning the usage of
plastic
bags is more beneficial and advantageous act to the environment in every aspect,
in addition
to the health of the society.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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