More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Nowadays, more people are relying on their private cars as their
transpostaion
specially in their commuting ways for work and home
requirments
required activity
requirements
, but
on the other
hand there
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hand, there
are many
disadvantage
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disadvantages
on
this
over-reliance
such
as the increasing in parking places problem, where to find a good place for your vehicle near to your work without getting a fine which almost causes in delaying on duty hours.
Also
, Many vehicles mean more
croweded
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
routes and more
poluttion
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
polluting
.
For instance
, to resolve traffics
cities
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city's
city
governenace
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government
governance
must provide many easy and cheap ways in transportation
such
as metros,
monotrails
a railway having a single track
monorails
minerals
mantras
and
electricty
using or providing or producing or transmitting or operated by electricity
electric
electricity
trains serving a wide range of all city segments with annual discount subscription
relaevent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
irrelevant
to the private car outlay which encourage people to
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
on
.
Accept space
.
Otherwise
, these kinds of transportation decrease the
poluution
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
by its non-
petroliom
a dark oil consisting mainly of hydrocarbons
petroleum
based technology in envoy which means healthier
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and fresh air.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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