THE GROWTH OF ON LINE SHOPING WILL ONE DAY LET TO ALL SHOPS IN TOWNS AND CITY CLOSING DO YOU AGREE OR DISAREE ?

Human being
survive
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survives
on daily needs stuff and personal belongings in their life’s where they can buy some on e-commerce applications or by walking into the shops. Exponentially numbers of online users are growing, despite of
this
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individuals
are still attract
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are still attracted
are still attracting
still attract
with
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to
physical shopping.
Although
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head off to shop take
time but
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time, but
devote palatable to people. I denied
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in future online shopping replace shops with relevant reasons in
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paragraphs. On the one hand
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there are multifarious reasons to choose
physical shopping
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a physical shopping
the physical shopping
but predominant reason is quality of product, which does not expose properly on screen and define it is
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secondly
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Secondly
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,
people
can not
can not
cannot
judge the product with prices
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where most of the ladies
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their bargaining rights and loose interaction between society.
for
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For
instance
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clothing and household things are unpredictable until have visual look
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size matters and price.
Thus
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these factors create a boundary between those ideas
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On the
second
hand
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online shopping is a long -process to deliver at customers place
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besides
this
physical shopping available around you easily in
vary
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varying
varied
instant varieties.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
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majority
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the majority
of people
belongs
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belong
to
medoiter
a vaguely specified concern
matter
scale whereas
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the scale, whereas
the scale whereas
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they prefer small shops while living in urban areas
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such
as
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lack of household things and in case of unexpected guest so that time these shops are much convenient.
Hence
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availability of products in emergency time is quite helpful
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In conclusion, I recapitulate
this
statement online shopping
explore
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explores
on some cases by who uses technology
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yet small sector business can not be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
by
this
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due to people are satisfied.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
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