Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Everyday
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Every day
a lot of people leave their hometown to move across countries.
This
exodus
affects
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effect
effects
on the society. Reasons of
immigration
are several: the majority of
human
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humanity
,
choses
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
chooses
chose
to abandon his nation to find a better life somewhere else. The giant movement of people has negative and positive effects on the community. To give an example, the phenomenon of
immigration
has lead
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has led
to the modern globalization and
this
, in my opinion, is a big benefit
for
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to
the contemporary population. Sometimes quit with your household, old friends, your habits and your customs
is
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are
the only way to go ahead. Principally for indigent classes of poorer nations,
immigration
is a way of salvation. Wars and hunger force citizens to leave their
neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
and run
faraway
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far away
,
for example
, the large amount of Africans who,
everyday
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every day
, arrives in Europe through the Mediterranean
see
a division of an ocean or a large body of salt water partially enclosed by land
sea
. Luckily, not everyone of immigrants do
this
long travel compelled by brutalities suffered, a lot of people, today, especially younger, leave
from
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of
their country to study or work abroad. In my opinion discover a new culture, learn a new language and leave the comfort zone is a
stimulant
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stimulating
experience and residents, who want leave, should be encouraged
instead
of
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to
be stopped. The
immigration
has lead a lot of advantages to the entire world. The globalization is the main consequence of
this
event. Migrants
has tried
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have tried
to blend their original customs with the culture of their hosting state.
This
mix has brought significant benefits to
big cities’s economy
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the big city’s economy
big city’s economy
. New jobs and new workers
has been introduced
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have been introduced
. Metropolis, like NYC, has
became
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become
Cosmopolites. New
neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
have
borned
have
borne
burned
born
, and a simple walking across downtown’s streets could be transformed in a real trip crosswise several nations. Advantages of
this
development
does not have been appricied
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have not appreciated
does not have been appreciated
haven't appreciated
does not have been approached
by everyone. Citizens of
little villages
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the little villages
are strictly related to their tradition and don’t want that anybody change them. In conclusion, I think that
immigration
is a natural phenomenon, which is impossible to stop, because
this
would
means
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mean
quit with development.

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