Digital communication technology such as e-mail, instant messaging and social media has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reason for your answers and include examples nd from your own knowledge or experience.

Automated interactive media
have undoubtedly broadened
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undoubtedly broadened
undoubtedly broaden
and deepened interaction and
connectivity
among people. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
notion because
this
advancement has brought about bridged gaps between family members in
diaspora
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the diaspora
and enhanced
connectivity
and
economy
.
Firstly
, the advancement has bridged gaps among relatives.
In other words
, family members no longer feel deserted when loved ones travel because the innovation of these media
such
as
whatsapp
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wasps
wasp
a wasp
,
skype
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Skype
,
wechat
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we chat
etc
has helped to relieve people emotionally.
Therefore
, it does not matter where people are located, they are just a button away.
For instance
, my brother has been in Canada since 2012 and there has never been a day
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
felt lonely since we are always chatting via
skype
Suggestion
Skype
.
Secondly
, it has enhanced
connectivity
and
economy
. The invention of these media has tremendously improved the
economy
.
That is
, people now connect with business associates all over the globe and get transactions done without itch
hence
, so many small medium scale businesses have thrived due to online marketing.
Therefore
, some stores that could not have been reckoned with are now
topping
the sound of light blow or knock
tapping
the markets.
For example
, online markets
such
as
Jumia
a preparation (usually made of sweetened chicle) for chewing
gum
game
, Konga, Cars45
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
have improved the
economy
of nations and individuals. In conclusion, digital communication media have unequivocally enhanced communion and
connectivity
as evident in the case of closing gaps between family members that are far apart and improved the
economy
of nations and people.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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