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It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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Culture
 is the backbone of any country.All the countries are taking necessary steps to protect their
culture
 and heritage.Some people say that, when you are in Rome be like a
roman
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
woman
.In
this
 essay, I will discuss whether people should adapt and accept the
culture
 of the country they
visit
 and
also
 the possibility of learning or adapting to the
culture
 without learning the
language
. Often
travelers
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
travels
 around the world
visit
 or explore at least few countries they haven`t been there before.In my perspective
,
Accept space
,
people should accept and make themselves
adaptable
Suggestion
adapting
adapted
 to the
countries
Suggestion
country's
 cultural system when they go there.It shows some kind of respect to the
peoples customs
Accept comma addition
peoples, customs
 and traditions.Though, they don`t have to completely change themselves by going through a makeover. At least
,
Accept space
,
show respect by their actions.
For example
, Many Americans
visit
 India to know about the rich
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
 heritage and learn about ancient medicine and architectures. I believe
language
 and
culture
 are completely different.Learning a
culture
 doesn`t need someone to learn their
language
.
For example
, if someone
visit
 a religious place of historic importance they can just follow the actions what the people are doing
,
Accept space
,
this
 doesn`t mean they are expected to recite the holy scriptures.Now a
days
Suggestion
day
,
locals
Suggestion
the locals
 are so considerate to the tourists and often help them in case of need.So, I believe learning a
culture
 is possible without
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
 a
language
. To conclude, people should adopt and accept the
culture
 of the country they
visit
 as
this
 shows some kind of respect.Whereas, learning
culture
 is quite possible without learning a
language
 just by knowing or making themselves aware of few cultural beliefs and acts.
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