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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. what are the advantages of this trend? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to
rapid boom
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the rapid boom
a rapid boom
 in technology,
food
 industries came with a new approach of
convenience
 foods. The rise of these
kind
 of foods has helped many people to move with the modern
life
 style. Despite of
busy schedule
Suggestion
busy schedules
a busy schedule
,
one
 can grab a quick meal or
food
 with them and can save
time
.
On the other hand
,
one
 has to worry about chemical preservatives used in
food
 to keep it fresh for
long
Suggestion
a long time
time
. In my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
one
 has
take
Suggestion
taken
 care about
food
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the food
 we eat rather than going
with
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to
 these
kind
 of fast foods.
To begin
 with,
convenience
 foods are a trend in
food industry
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the food industry
 because of instant
food
 which were already prepared.
This
 is because of the modern
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 adopted by the people and helping them a lot to save
time
.
For example
,
one
 of my
cousion
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cousins
cousin
 who is an
entreprenuer
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
 and packed with work all day and does not have
time
 to cook
food
 but,
convenience
 foods helping him in his modern lifestyle.
Therefore
, it is the go-to option these days.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages are more which will
impacat
the striking of one body against another
impact
 in
later stage
Suggestion
later stages
the later stage
 of
life
. Some of the problems with
this
kind
 of foods are the preservatives used in it and the quality of the products.
This
 is due to store foods for long
time
 period. A professor at the
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
Univeristy
 of Sydney says that " 40 percent of the people who consume
convenince
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
 foods regularly are likely to suffer from cancer".
Therfore
Suggestion
Therefore
,
one
 has to be aware of the preservatives used in it. The modern
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 of people changed the
food
 industry in many ways. Some of the advantages are quick to grab and eat.
As a result
,
one
 can save
time
. To the contrary, it is harmful to the people who consumes regularly. In my view, it is not advisable to go with
this
kind
 of
convenience
 foods lifestyle.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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