The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. what are the advantages of this trend? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to
rapid boom
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the rapid boom
a rapid boom
in technology,
food
industries came with a new approach of
convenience
foods. The rise of these
kind
of foods has helped many people to move with the modern
life
style. Despite of
busy schedule
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busy schedules
a busy schedule
,
one
can grab a quick meal or
food
with them and can save
time
.
On the other hand
,
one
has to worry about chemical preservatives used in
food
to keep it fresh for
long
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a long time
time
. In my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
one
has
take
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taken
care about
food
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the food
we eat rather than going
with
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to
these
kind
of fast foods.
To begin
with,
convenience
foods are a trend in
food industry
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the food industry
because of instant
food
which were already prepared.
This
is because of the modern
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
adopted by the people and helping them a lot to save
time
.
For example
,
one
of my
cousion
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cousins
cousin
who is an
entreprenuer
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
and packed with work all day and does not have
time
to cook
food
but,
convenience
foods helping him in his modern lifestyle.
Therefore
, it is the go-to option these days.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages are more which will
impacat
the striking of one body against another
impact
in
later stage
Suggestion
later stages
the later stage
of
life
. Some of the problems with
this
kind
of foods are the preservatives used in it and the quality of the products.
This
is due to store foods for long
time
period. A professor at the
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
Univeristy
of Sydney says that " 40 percent of the people who consume
convenince
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
foods regularly are likely to suffer from cancer".
Therfore
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Therefore
,
one
has to be aware of the preservatives used in it. The modern
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
of people changed the
food
industry in many ways. Some of the advantages are quick to grab and eat.
As a result
,
one
can save
time
. To the contrary, it is harmful to the people who consumes regularly. In my view, it is not advisable to go with
this
kind
of
convenience
foods lifestyle.
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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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