In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

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Before the industrial era, people used to stay

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one

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place

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throughout their

life

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. Nowadays, a vast majority prefers and stays at different places all over the

world

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. The main reason is the change in the way of

life

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expecially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

the jobs and I consider

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as a

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

trend. In olden days,

majority

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the majority

of people had agriculture or farming as their profession and

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there was no need or rather little option to

move

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around. The whole family used to work in the fields for their living and that was the

world

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to them.

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money

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the money

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less during those times and they had to think

twice even

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twice, even

before spending on something

that is

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not an immediate necessity.

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, transportation facilities were

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less and they had to walk or go

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with

trains for days if they need to reach a far away land.

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, knowledge about the

world

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was

also

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less and people never found a reason to

move

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around.

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, due to the drastic development in technology, things have changed and

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this is reflected even

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this is even reflected

in people's lifestyle.

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, job profile has entirely changed and very few people rely on farming. Majority works on technical fields and these jobs are

concentarted

gathered together or made less diffuse

concentrated

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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385 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

job mobility
career opportunities
relocate
advancements in transportation
diverse experiences
lifestyle changes
education pursuits
academic pursuits
economic factors
cost of living
housing affordability
migration decisions
personal relationships
family responsibilities
retirement
quality of life
desirable locations
globalization
social networks
remote work

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