Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement ?
To a certain extent I agree that Governments should allocate budget to railways rather than road transport.
However
, I Linking Words
also
believe that roadways are essential to the nation and Linking Words
also
plays a significant role in Linking Words
transportation
.
On one hand, there are reasons why Use synonyms
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government
should spend on railways Suggestion
the government
instead
on Linking Words
roads
as we as follows. Suggestion
the roads
Firstly
, railways Linking Words
transports
large numbers of passengers and goods every year across the nation for long distances and Suggestion
transport
also
carries the major burden than any other transport system. So, that construction of new rail tracks to the new location would increase the ease of Linking Words
transportation
and revenue generation. Use synonyms
Moreover
, these are long-term establishments which are worthwhile Linking Words
also
reduces overwhelming traffic issues. Linking Words
Secondly
, Introduction of modernised compartments and new trains to major cities could encourage people to go Linking Words
by
rails, Suggestion
with
in addition
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this
train fares are economical Linking Words
with
comparison to roadways for a same distance wise. Suggestion
in
Lastly
, trains Linking Words
are
comfortable and convenient than others for long hours, Suggestion
is
for instance
, mostly senior citizens suffer with arthritis, Linking Words
this
is why they unable to sit for long durations. In Linking Words
such
cases, railways offer relief by allowing the reservation of berths.
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On the other hand
, railways unable to cover all Linking Words
transportation
requirements in the entire nation, so that roadways are Use synonyms
also
essential to Linking Words
whole system
and Suggestion
the whole system
this
created need to spend capital on roads by Linking Words
government
. At Use synonyms
first
, nowadays owning a vehicle has become a lifestyle for many of us, Linking Words
thus
traffic has increased immensely. In order to avoid or reduce traffic jam, the Linking Words
government
should Use synonyms
also
construct flyovers and outer ring roads in cities, Linking Words
besides
four or six lane highways could reduce Linking Words
accident ratio
and so on. Suggestion
the accident ratio
Finally
, road journeys are entertaining Linking Words
to
small families, and they can stop Suggestion
for
vehicle especially
cars wherever they want, and can enjoy the personal and family space and have sightseeing opportunity, probably creates long-lasting memories for them all.
To sum up, spending money on railways could yield a high return on investment to Accept comma addition
vehicle, especially
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government
with all advantages of revenue and employment creation. Suggestion
govern
However
, neglecting roadways Linking Words
seems
to have had Suggestion
seem
potential threat
to the whole system of Suggestion
a potential threat
transportation
in a country.
Use synonyms
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