Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation have not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solution to combat this problem? Support your answers with specific reasons and example.

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To combat the increasing environmental problem, most Nations has in one way or the other contributed
immensily
to an exceedingly great extent or degree
immensely
to improve our
sorroundings
the environmental condition
surroundings
which has proved futile. The causes
ranges
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range
from deforestation and overwhelming air pollution we are experiencing and measures to resolve
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is by encouraging the agriculturists and farmers to plant more trees and producing more fuels which emit
less pollutant
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less pollution
. Some factors have brought about the environmental issues that we experience
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Deforestation has been so detrimental to our
sorroundings
the environmental condition
surroundings
. Trees are cut down to be used in constructing furnitures as well as erecting houses which has brought about
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the low level
of
oxygen
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in circulation. To illustrate, trees take in carbon-dioxide to produce
oxygen
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which is what keeps human beings alive and when deforestation takes place it drastically reduces the amount of
oxygen
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for inhalation.
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, increased rate of automobile has brought pollution in our place of stay.
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is in order to satisfy the growing population by providing easy access to places. So, are there strategies we can
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put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employ
to resolve
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impending issue? Yes, there are. Government should encourage individuals to plant trees and flowers so as to bring in more
oxygen
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.
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will help in enhancing the health status of the public.
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, companies should consider producing
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diesel, which
emits minimal carbon-monoxide,
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will dramatically reduce the pollution of air. In conclusion, much outstanding
efforts
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effort
has been made by Nations to reduce the challenges of our environment which has not yet solved the problems.
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is
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of bush clearing and increased use of machines and it can be resolved by planting more trees and flowers in our
sorroundings
the environmental condition
surroundings
as well as producing less carbon monoxide diesel for machines use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental degradation
  • Fossil fuels
  • Air and water pollution
  • Deforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Enforcement of environmental laws
  • Illegal dumping
  • Over-exploitation
  • Overpopulation
  • Waste production
  • Resource consumption
  • Climate change
  • Extreme weather events
  • Rising sea levels
  • Consumer culture
  • Overconsumption
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Emissions
  • Stricter environmental regulations
  • Enforcement
  • Reforestation
  • Conservation of natural habitats
  • Sustainable agricultural practices
  • Public awareness campaigns
  • Sustainable consumer behaviors
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