Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past decades, environmental problem has never ceased to draw public attention and provoke

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debate

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governments have been spending magnificence effort to tackle with it, the issue as to whether people should take almost responsibility for their local environment or not remain controversial. From my own

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perspective, this

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approach would be

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a very shortsighted view

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following the reason below. On the one

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, it is important to recognize that the

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a person who is in charge

chief

culprit of air pollution is the rapid growth of manufactory industry. In fact, the pollutants from industries which are discharged into

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the atmosphere

have to be accountable for the reducing of air condition.

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problem

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seems

likely too big

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for

individuals to solve, so that, governments should play an irreplaceable role in order to

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minimize

it.

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authorities

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the authorities

could control the emission and impose

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environmentally

friendly materials into factories, I believe that environmental problems should be addressed in

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a short time

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, some may argue that the contribution of residents is

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necessary.

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argument could be true to some extent because individuals should play

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a significant role

toward the safety of environmental by simple actions

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as not using the enormous of plastic which would damage natural

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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, in daily life.

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, it is undeniable that gas emission from transportation is one of the

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producers

of carbon dioxide.

so

to a very great extent or degree

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that, if people could change their travelling habits,

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issue could be more acceptable.

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, in some countries like Japan, people prefer consuming public

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transport, which

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uses

eco-friendly energy

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as electric or solid rather than private vehicles.

As a result

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, the local air conditions have been significantly

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improved

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example indicates that the attitude of resident to environmental protecting should never be underestimated. In conclusion, making people be responsible for environmental problem is paramount important.

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, the comprehensive solution needs the combination of both governments and residents as mentioned above