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Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

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Nowadays, it has become
trend
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a trend
 among people to leave their own
country
 to
work
 or live abroad.People choose to
work
 in countries which are more developed than their own for higher standards of living.In
this
 essay, I will discuss that working and settling in other nations has more advantages than disadvantages. Compared to the past, people
from
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of
 the underdeveloped or developing are now more attracted to get a job in the abroad as they can get the salary which meets their qualification and
expectation
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expectations
.The good amount of
money which
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money, which
 they earn and send to their loved ones in their home
country
 makes a significant proportion to the
indian
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Indian
 economy.
Moreover
,
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,
working in a developed nation gives an individual opportunity to enjoy higher standards of living than their birth
country
.Better health facilities, job opportunities
,
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,
quality of education and safety are the key measures which drive people to
work
 abroad.
Moreover
,
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,
traffic and
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 is
also
 less in the developed nations.The well known-fact is that people in the
first
 world
country
 live
healthy
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healthier
 and
wealthy
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wealthier
 life than those in the
third
 world
country
. On the other side, when young talent moves to other counties to
work
 or live
,
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,
then
 it creates the scarcity of talent in the home
country
.Living in
abroad
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a broad
disconnects
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disconnect
 them from their parents
,
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,
culture, values and the near ones. After
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 both of the sides of
situation
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the situation
a situation
, I believe that the advantages of living abroad outweigh the disadvantages.Not only the people who immigrate, it
also
 benefits the
country
 of birth in one or more ways.
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