Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

It is true that most societies have faced with
health
problems of
inhabitants
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the inhabitants
because of unhealthy eating habits which they follow over the recent decades. There are several reasons
to
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for
this
issue, but still some steps can be taken to tackle to solve
this
problem. In my opinion, three main factors are to blame that why people are not in
favor
promote over another
favour
of having
healthy diet
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a healthy diet
.
Firstly
, the vast majority of people are busy with the burden of living in modern societies,
in other words
, they have to spend a significant of their time at work.
Therefore
, there is not
adaquate
having the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task
adequate
time
to
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in
preparing their meals at
home ,
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home, consequently
consequently
, they have to
having
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have
have had
their daily foods at restaurants which are usually are not serving a nutritious and healthy meal.
Secondly
, most of the healthy
nutritionsare
expensive, and it is not affordable to consumed by many people.
For example
, the price of organic ingredients is not comparable to cheap fast foods.
Finally
, the adverse impacts of
junk foods' advertisement
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the junk foods' advertisement
should be considered as a persuasive factor to
worsing
grow worse
worsen
using
this
issue.
Nevertheless
, there are several solutions that could be addressed to combat with
this
notion.
To begin
, individuals should take the responsibility of their
health
in terms of cooking healthy foods as well as considering the nutritional values of ingredients.
Furthermore
, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
could
subsidies
secure the assistance of by granting a subsidy, as of nations or military forces
subsidise
subsidize
a
varity
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
of organic ingredients and make them affordable to many
calsses
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
classes
cases
causes
of society. At the same time, the government should set stricter control against food companies which are advertising their harmful products through mass media. In conclusion, societies will continue to face the their
citizens
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citizens'
health
probelm
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
in results of having unhealthy diet problems unless individuals and governments
be
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are
are being
more careful about the importance of a healthy diet and its numerous impacts on people's
health
.
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