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International tourism has become a huge industry the world. Do the problems of international tourism outweigh its advantage?

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Nowadays, people have seen the need to travel out of
there
of them or themselves
their
 comfort zone and change environment, not only for the exposure, but for other gains, which would be discussed later on in
this
 essay.
This
 has led to increased
rate
Suggestion
rates
 of
tourism
 and boost in the aviation industries all over the world, though with its pros and cons. For the purpose of
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would be in support of international
tourism
. While there are many drawbacks to international
tourism which
Accept comma addition
tourism, which
 cannot be overlooked, like peoples luggages getting missing on arrival, with all
there
of them or themselves
their
 valuables lost (of which my sibling was a victim of
this
 in 2015), people are
also
 exposed to life threatening diseases
endermic
of or relating to a disease (or anything resembling a disease) constantly present to greater or lesser extent in a particular locality
endemic
 in
such
 countries.
Also
, 2018 statistics in the united states of America
has shown
Suggestion
have shown
 that a lot of people who travelled to the states (especially Africans), never returned, as they decided to stay back and look for greener pasture.
This
 has left a heavy burden upon the shoulders of
there
of them or themselves
their
 family members, as there is no one to fill the vacuum which they left. In some countries with increased terrorism, most tourists fall victim to these terrorist attacks.
This
 doesn’t take away the fact that there are many advantages of international tourisms like travelling for medical purposes, recreation, business and even educational purposes. In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, while there are disadvantages of international
tourism
, the advantages actually outweigh them, and as
such
, it should be encouraged for those who can actually afford them as the benefits can never be
overemphasised
Suggestion
over emphasised
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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