Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others believe that they should educate with each other. Do you agree or disagree?

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These days there are two models of educate

such

as single

gender

or mixed

gender

educate. So some people agree with single

gender

educate, but others agree

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with

multi

gender

educate. I agree with mixed

gender education

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gender, education

and in

this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

explain why

refers to the speaker or writer

agree with

this

issue. At the

first

, when boys and girls educate with together, they learn how to behave with

dissenting

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dissents

sex, they learn mentality and morality of their opposite sex.

Also some

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Also, some

children are shy and they

can not

cannot

communicate with opposite

gender

, so when they mixed with dissenting

gender

while their childhood, they can win on their

shy

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shyness

and fear to communicate with them. In the

second

, single sex education

also

has some advantages.

For

instance all

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instance, all

of us know that male and female have a lot of

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

somatic and

mentality

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the mentality

which their usage of their environment are

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

toward together. So if they

want use one

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want to use one

common thing that needs to a

stable

meant or adapted for an occasion or use

suitable

qualification, they face

problem

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problems

a problem

. But

however

this

type of educate has

this

disadvantage, and it

can not

cannot

resolve

social

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socially

communicate between boys and girls, and

also

we know that we are living in communication period so we need to have extreme relationship. In conclusion, in my

opinion it

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opinion, it

is better boys and girls

educatewith

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educate to

educate with

each other till they grow up, they can enter

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into

community and do their responsibility well ordered.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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