Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others believe that they should educate with each other. Do you agree or disagree?

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educate. So some people agree with single

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educate, but others agree

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educate. I agree with mixed

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gender education

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gender, education

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, when boys and girls educate with together, they learn how to behave with

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dissents

sex, they learn mentality and morality of their opposite sex.

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Also some

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Also, some

children are shy and they

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communicate with opposite

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, so when they mixed with dissenting

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while their childhood, they can win on their

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shyness

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, single sex education

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has some advantages.

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instance, all

of us know that male and female have a lot of

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the mentality

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want to use one

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problems

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disadvantage, and it

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communicate between boys and girls, and

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educate to

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each other till they grow up, they can enter

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community and do their responsibility well ordered.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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