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Many people believe that advertising can have negative effects on customers. To what extent do you agree?

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A multitude of populace
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 that endorsements lead to pernicious implications
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 consumers. I concur with the notion to a certain extent;
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, it has a gigantic role to play in
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educating
 folks. To embark on, one of the cascading aftermath of commercials is the misleading content. Advertisers focus on forging an idea that has larger than life to it. In the process of creating something humongous, makers end up inserting a few distorted facts. By appointing renowned actors, singers, and sportsmen as brand ambassadors, producers entice buyers to avail the product. To exemplify,
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 Mountain Dew is a soft drink that quenches one’s thirst, the advert exhibits Hrithik Roshan performing daredevil stunts after sipping the drink. Folks, especially adolescents get captivated by
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 extreme adventures, and adults feel like it is just a matter of consuming a specific drink.
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, a mere presence of a star turn the table in favour of a brand sans worrying about the hazardous impact the item could cause.
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, the incessant push to educate the market by adverts has garnered accolades as well. Any good or service prevalent or about to release
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 the market gets recognition through commercials and guide masses about the content, price, and usage. Social awareness campaigns are received well because of the promotions.
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, is quite effective in assisting teenagers grasping the nitty-gritty of the topics and got its fan base because of the advertisements only. Another example is
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 Clean India Drive initiated by Prime Minister Narendra Modi, which was bestowed with enormous support because of the extensive adverts. To encapsulate, endorsements can have
downside impact
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a downside impact
 on consumers because sometimes it misguide the innocent masses to make an enormous image of an item, and producers opt for famous personalities to lure populace.
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, advertisement forges awareness and propagates social messages as well
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