Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In
this
competetive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
era, many people
shows
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show
interest to migrate to foreign country for various reasons like education, career e.t.c.
and
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And
thereby it is argued that speaking an unknown
language
in a country could be problematic both in day-to-day life and
also
socially and so from my point of view, I agree with the statement.
Firstly
,
language
is a barrier to approach any person for any sort of work that needs to be done and
for
example let
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example, let
me describe an incident that happened to us recently in a bank. As me and my husband planned to buy a new car, we contacted the car company where we choose to take the car and the manager explained all the details of the process like we can pay half amount in a cash and remaining half as a
loan
and
inspite
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in spite
of that, we decided to take a bank
loan
and approached the head of the bank and we asked all the details related to the
loan
and as the manager is a native
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
speaker, the slang of the person is quite different from ours we faced a problem in finding out the
necessasary
absolutely essential
necessary
information regarding the
loan
process.
Secondly
, as part of our trip to
perenthian
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parenting
island, we booked a hotel room for
accomodataion
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
accommodating
at the nearby island and it is difficult to communicate with the receptionist of the hotel as the lady
is speaking
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speaks
in Malai, the
language
which we are unaware of. Actually, we
prebooked
incited, especially deliberately, to anger
provoked
the hotel room in a fair
that is
happened
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happening
last
year, we just want to postpone our visit due to some personal problems and
therefore
we want to inform the matter to the management and we called them, but as we are not familiar with the
language
we could not able to understand and
inorder
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in order
to sort out
this
problem we took a help from one of our
friend
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friends
who can speak the
language
and so the issue got resolved. So,
finally
in my perspective as mentioned above leading a life in a place where we have to use foreign
language
can be quite difficult in our regular life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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