A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

It is rightly said that
health
is wealth. A healthy person can lead a
realtively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
peaceful
lice
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louse
. In my country
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
use
number
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a number
of different ways to stay healthy. There are many different routines people follow to stay healthy.
Main factors
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The main factors
that affect a person's
health
are their diet, level of physical activity and any habits that can have a
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impact
such
as smoking. To stay healthy
firstly
, the people consume the food according to a diet plan that suits their body the best. Food habits
contrubute
bestow a quality on
contribute
contributed
contributes
the most in
majority
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the majority
of
health
issues.
For example
, an overweight person can control and bring the
wight
the vertical force exerted by a mass as a result of gravity
weight
down by regular consumption of green vegetables, fruits and other low calorie food items. Care must be taken while cutting down the calories. It is a
logn
primarily temporal sense; being or indicating a relatively great or greater than average duration or passage of time or a duration as specified
long
process and must be implemented gradually. Sudden change in dietary practices can harm the body. The
second
factor that
have
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has
major impact on a
prerson's
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person's
health
is the level of physical activities during day to day routine. These days people's professions are increasingly becoming technology oriented and
thus
resulting in people having
sedentary lifestyle
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a sedentary lifestyle
.
This
has
resulsted
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
resulted
in more and more
health
concious
intentionally conceived
conscious
people starting to exercise, join
health
clubs and gymnasiums. For the jobs that require some level of labour or physical activity, one does not have to exercise
additionally
, but people with desk jobs must adhere to an exercise plan.
For example
, the computer engineers write software all day long sitting at
same place
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the same place
. For them it is must that they get their necessary
does
treat with an agent; add (an agent) to
dose
doses
of
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. There are other factors
also
leading to a healthy life
sucha
s not having bad habits
such
as smoking or consumption of
liqour
an alcoholic beverage that is distilled rather than fermented
liquor
. Society is becoming more
awae
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
against the
helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
issues resulting from these
habis
an auxiliary activity
hobbies
habits
and people are taking steps to get rid of them. To
conclude I
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conclude, I
believe being healthy is our own responsibility and we must ensure ourselves that we lead a
lifestyly
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
that result in our healthy self.
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