Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Major issues, that most of the countries are encountering, are related to environment, population and education. Even in my country, we are facing the same issues. We are going to discuss regarding the same in the later part. Coming to the problems,
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, Population growth,
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is caused due to lack of information
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the people regarding the consequences.
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in turn leads to rest of two problems. Huge density of population not only contributes to lower economic
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growth, but
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increase environmental wastage and improper
educaiton
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
.
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, For the
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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
, it is easier to provide better education facilities
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ten thousand people rather than a million. Percentage of increase in pollution will be 1000 times because of the rise in
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the count
. They may be caused due to water, air and through deforestation. Some important solution's for the above are as follows.
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, Ruling party should create awareness in
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the general public
, regarding the large families.
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, It should impose strict rules that
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are causing
have caused
are caused
the Eco damage, either by reducing the present consumption or by imposing
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a ban
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increase the number of schools and provide free knowledge,
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up to
some grade. In Conclusion, It's not the responsibility of the elected member's, but
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each and every individual to
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terminate, end, or take out
eliminate
the cause and build the healthy and safe society for our future generations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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