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Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this be solved

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Cities act as a magnet for everyone due to the quest for greener pastures and to partake in urban sprawl.
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 cause of crowding in major cities can be solved by government actions
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 as dispersing development
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in
of
 the rural areas and encouraging women to practice different birth control methods.
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 essay will elucidate on these causes of human congestion in the urban areas and various ways to curb
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 problem. Young school leavers who seek for jobs and better living move to the cities to make their daily living.
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, everyone has the notion that life in the urban areas is fast moving with numerous job opportunities due to high concentration of industries and multinational companies.
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, so many people relocate from rural areas to the cities In search of greener pasture.
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, most government offices, good schools, well equipped hospitals, private businesses are usually seen in the big cities. Due to
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 reason, individuals and families who wish
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to enjoy
standardized way
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a standardized way
 of living prefer to dwell in the city. The solution to overcrowding can be achieved by taking development
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in
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 the rural areas.
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, providing them with quality hospitals, good schools and education, building agricultural related industries and setting up most government offices.
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 will help create employment and
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 the town.
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, the use of various birth control methods by women will drastically reduce the world’s population. In conclusion, with the political will to disperse development and
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 a reduction in
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the number
 of
birth
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births
 in a country, the issue of overpopulation in large cities would be solved.
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