Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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People really like watching movies either at the cinemas or on their laptop.

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, some people believe that watching movies

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just a waste of time. In

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essay, I shall give my personal opinion to oppose

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statement.

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with, people need to refresh their mind after they do the tiring work. By watching movies, they can relax a bit and get lost in the movie plot which can help them in recharging their energy. It

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allows people to strengthen their relationship with friends and family.

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, so many couples and family go to the cinema at the weekend as a form of spending quality time with their beloved ones. I believe that sharing similar interest and doing activities together with family and friends can bring joy and happiness among society. Another example is teenagers may have different interest and knowledge regarding so many things with their parents.

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, watching the same movie together can solve

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generation gap issue and allow teenagers to share common movie-related topics with their parents.

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, watching movies is

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the most effective way to learn new languages.

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, there are so many Indonesian teenagers who can speak fluently since they watch Korean dramas. I am certain that

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method is more effective than in-class learning. It makes

people learn

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people, learn

new languages unconsciously. In conclusion, watching movies has several benefits, namely it can refresh our mind, make us closer to our friends and families, and allow us to learn

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a new language

effectively. I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks, so

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activity cannot be considered as a waste of time.

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