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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is a fact that many
people especially
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people, especially
 elderly parents like to stay without changing their lifestyle.
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 gap is a growing problem, followed by a discussion of how teaching values is the most viable solution. One main problem of
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 is the
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 gap why many people do not like to accept the contemporary lifestyle.
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 is because they are unwilling to give up their traditional and spiritual values and
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 creates a fear that their kids would forget to follow these beliefs.
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 results in developing a space amid parents and children, who are likely to be westernized to the modern culture. To illustrate
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, in conventional countries
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 as India, people performing
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prayers, particularly
 on Tuesdays and Fridays, which are considered as the purest days, have reduced to 39% amongst the younger
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. The best solution to
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 is to inculcate the traditional values since their childhood.
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 would mean that if
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the parents
 pass on their values by educating the customs and rituals followed by their ancestors to their children, they might continue to their
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generation
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 will unlikely to have any negative impact on the modern-day lifestyle.
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, 65% of people, who shifted from developing countries, living in the developed countries follow their religious ceremony on special occasions because of being taught about the knowledge of values since their early age. In conclusion, it may be true that many parents stand firm with the same life because they are orthodox and thereby creating a gap between parents and their children, but if they offspring are taught about the traditional belief, the problem can be alleviated.
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