University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantage of studying abroad over weigh the disadvantage ?

These days more and more students are opting for abroad studies.
Although
, the main advantage of studying in foreign countries is that students are more focused in their studies,
however
, it is quite a
herculean
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Herculean
task to live away from family. In my opinion, studying in a different
country
has more advantages despite the challenges that they will face
inevitably
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inevitable
.
The Greatest
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The greatest
The great
The greater
benefit of acquiring knowledge away from
country
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the country
is that it makes students more focused and determined towards their study goals. Human by nature is a
complexly
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complex
designed Creation of the
God
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Gods
, with the ability to adapt to every harsh
circumstances
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circumstance
. Being away from home, the inner
conscious
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consciousness
of responsibility makes a student more focused, committed, and determined towards study targets.
Furthermore
, the inner belief of achieving success encourages him to stay firm to attain the impossible ones.
For example
, when I studied in Qatar for two years, I used to work for twelve hours a day continuously without being exhausted. For these reasons, studying out of
country
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the country
has
advantage
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advantages
because it keeps students in a track. The main disadvantages that students can face while acquainting knowledge out of
country
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the country
is the fact that they will be away from their families.
This
significantly puts them under immense psychological stress that can lead to
depression
if not coped with. A study in America,
for instance
, shows that
growing number
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a growing number
of foreign students living there, are consulting their psychiatrists due to chronic stress and home sickness leading to
depression
. Due to these reasons, staying in some other
country
for
purpose
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the purpose
of education is a tough ask. To sum up, a toll taking number of students are studying outside their countries as part of their
degrees
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degree
.
Although
, it keeps them focused on their studies,
however
, it can put them under
depression
as well. But having said that, the advantage of studying abroad is far more advantageous than the disadvantage of possible
depression
.
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