It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.

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In many countries these days, families no longer have close relationships.
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is because of the
increase
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in the number of parents who
work
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full-
time
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and the rise in the
use
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of mobile devices and
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internet
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the internet
. Solutions to
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negative trend would be propose.
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, an important reason for the decrease in close family relationships is the
increase
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in the number of parents who are employed full-
time
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.
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, many husbands and wives today are employed and have little
time
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to interact with themselves and take care of their children.
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, many married couples in Nigeria
work
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between eight to ten hours daily which limits the quality
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needed to spend with themselves and interact with their children.
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, many families are no longer close compared to
few years
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a few years
ago.
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, the
increase
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in the dependency on mobile devices and internets by parents as well as a parents interfere with family relationship. It is common to see members of a family preoccupied with their phones which limits the
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needed to discuss as a family.
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, many families rarely have dinners together today because members of the household are often busy with their phones and online friends rather than being brought together.
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situation could have improved if families reduce the
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spent on mobile devices and on
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internet
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the internet
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Fortunately
,
ther
in or at that place
there
are two promising solutions to
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problem. One significant way to bring family closer is to
increase
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the
time
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off
work
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for married couples. Both the government and private employers should promote part-
time
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work
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for at least one of the parents and
increase
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the duration of holidays
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as paternity and maternity leaves.
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will offer husbands and wives more
time
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for themselves and to care for their children. More so, efforts towards reducing the
use
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of
mobile electronic device
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a mobile electronic device
and the internets at home should be promoted.
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could be through setting up
time
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limits on the
use
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of phones at home.
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, there would be more
time
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to bring families together. In conclusion, parents spend more
time
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working and they as well as their children are becoming dependent on their phones and the
internet
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which has interfered with family relationships.
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problem
could be solve
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could be solved
by ensuring parents have more
time
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off
work
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and reducing the
use
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of telecommunication devices and the
internet
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at home.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • family interactions
  • technological advancements
  • virtual interactions
  • dual-income households
  • urbanization
  • migration
  • social structures
  • individualism
  • family cohesiveness
  • belonging
  • open communication
  • emotional support
  • shared activities
  • family dynamics
  • work-life balance
  • family traditions
  • regular gatherings
  • counseling
  • family therapy
  • prioritizing family time
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