Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times.They don't wantbtheir children tobread any entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?why?

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Books
a natural stream of water smaller than a river (and often a tributary of a river)
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plays a crucial role in everyone's life.
most
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Most
people choose them to read according to their interest.Reading academic books
is believed
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are believed
by some parents to be more significant for their children
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, entertainment books has no importance in their mental growth.In my opinion,
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disagree with
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because
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feel that both of these educational and entertainment books hold equal importance for adolescent. There are several reasons why children should read academic books.
one
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One
of the most indispensable
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reasons
is that these may enhance concentration on their study by acquiring a depth knowledge about the curriculum syllabus, resulting in obtaining the outstanding performance in the examinations.
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, by reading academic syllabus is usually
generates
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generated
logically thinking skill in order to compete with other students in logical thinking based quiz competition.
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, during my school days most of the time
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used to solve
mathematics
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mathematical
exercises.So,
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subject helped me to attain logical thinking skill.
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, owing to these reasons
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agree with
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notion that children should focus on school syllabus. There is no doubt that recreational books have
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numerous advantages.These
oftenly boost
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oftenly boosts
the mental strength of adolescent since
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textbooks would definitely help in diminishing their stress level by reading interesting stories
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When children access
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materials
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their
imagination skill
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imagination, skill
is more likely to
improved
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improve
. Due to
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they will be
more creative person
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a more creative person
in their life.
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, if they do not read them in their childhood
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,
obviously they will be less creative than those children who read them.
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,
such
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textbooks have
positive influence
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a positive influence
on their growth.So, that's why
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would like to demonstrate that entertainment sources should be read by them. In conclusion,
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the academic books have tremendous impact on their life because of certain
benefits but
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benefits, but
,
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I
believe that enjoyable
textbooks develop
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textbooks, develop
not only mental strength, but
also
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able to generate more creative skills.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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