The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise?do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

It is

undeniable

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undeniably

true that globe is unimaginable without

population

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.Few individuals think that increase in the world's

population

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is the major problem faced by humanity

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I totally agree with the statement presented.I elucidate my stand in the following paragraphs. The

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and foremost reason for supporting the concept of increased the universal

population

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is highly educated person because if the human being have educated

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it get

highly paid job

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a highly paid job

and have no financial problem in their lives.If they live

luxiours life

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a luxurious life, then

a luxurious life then

luxurious life then

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they have no problem regarding birth to the more children because they have financial stable.

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to that

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another

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to be considered and cannot be overlooked is human lives longer lives because they have educated and

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know about the medical facilities.They

also

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get nutrients diet to live longer life which is the main reason to

rise

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in society. Moving

further

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no one can deny the

cause

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of increasing

population

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.The major adverse impact it has is poverty.With the

rise

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in community, demands of jobs are

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rise

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rising

day by

day but

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day, but

elder people do not resign their jobs in early ages

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number

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of unemployment increases and

it

it is

it's

impact on the society

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a survey was conducted in New Delhi

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the

number

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of people to fill the registration form for one job is near about thousands.Another

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cause

an occurrence of something

case

involved in air -borne diseases.If the

number

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of

citizenry

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the citizenry

is

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rise

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rising

than

air-borne

moved or conveyed by or through air

airborne

diseases are

occured

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occurring

occurred

in the humanity.

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pollution is

also

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the main

cause

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of

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continued

rise

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.With the

rise

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in society

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,

the

number

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of automobiles

increases

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increases, then

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the roads are

conjusted

overfull as with blood

congested

and traffic jams

occured

come to pass

occurred

which helped to increase the

population

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and causes many diseases like heart diseases. In conclusion

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I recapitulate that there are innumerable strong arguments supporting the problems faced by mankind

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as poverty

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pollution and

air-borne

moved or conveyed by or through air

airborne

urban

orphan

diseases due to the

rise

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of humanity.